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:iconwolf02:
Overall this is a beautful shot, the composition is terrific, your framing as usual, is great.

One thing that stands out to me is the Depth of Field. It just throws me off that the left flower is so sharply in focus while the right flow is so blurred. I think in a picture like this it would have been better for both to be focused.

Also, the lighting on the left flower seems a little off. While it does make the innards of the flower pop, it also kind of washes out the petal.

The background has enough to it to not be boring, but not so much as to be boring, great work on that!

As I said, overall I definitely like the shot, and the stuff I pointed out is just my personal take, photography is so much about preference :)
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wow the flower is realy beautiful.

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:iconcsnyder:
bootyful and the detail and colors:faint:wowza
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:omg: :wow:

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I can't tell you how perfect this photo is :jawdrop:

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Don't know how you achieved this but I know that it is super! Marcia
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Really beautiful. :) You're featured! [link] :heart:

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These flowers are beautiful, and they make quite a pair!

What kind of flowers are these; do you know?

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iLove!

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Love it! awesome!

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